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645176732 Posted 17 years ago
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Argumentative essay

I am required to write an argumentative essay on the topic of " Do you think that the school has enough CCA ( co-curriculum activities ) "
can someone pls help to write some paragraph to continue. I really have no idea how to write it. T.T
Points - yes, the school has enough CCA
- quantity is not quality
- Creating a new CCA means reduction in resources,equipment,manpower( teachers ) and also mean that there will be lesser students in other CCA
- Some CCA require a certain sum of student , ( Volleyball . competition.athletics )
- we should focus on improving existing CCA rather than creating new CCAs.

( Co-curriculum activites --- http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Co-curricular activity(Singapore) )

Any kind soul and english-pro are there. PLS HELP ME. ONLY this time.T.
  

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You could try: I believe the school does have enough CCA. My reasons for this are: The quality of the activities is maintained at the current level. If this increase, quality may suffer.

  • You could try: I believe the school does have enough CCA.
  • My reasons for this are: The quality of the activities is maintained at the current level.
  • If this increase, quality may suffer.
  • If there are more CCA's available, there will be greater choice for students, but there may be a reduction of resources in terms of resources, equipment and manpower.
  • Student numbers for some CCA's may be reduced which could affect the activities requiring a minimum number.
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You could try:

I believe the school does have enough CCA. My reasons for this are:

  • The quality of the activities is maintained at the current level. If this increase, quality may suffer.

  • If there are more CCA's available, there will be greater choice for students, but there may be a reduction of resources in terms of resources, equipment and manpower.

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