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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Aren't there too many "of" in the title?

Hi!

Can I write this title like this or are there too many "of"?

John Smith, a prosecutor of the Division for Investigation of Especially Important Matters of the Criminal Justice Department of the Office of the Prosecutor General of the Republic of Cyprus.

Thanks!
  

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Too many!!! John Smith, a prosecutor in the Investigation Division … …. no, this sentence doesn't make sense.

  • Too many!!!
  • John Smith, a prosecutor in the Investigation Division … ….
  • no, this sentence doesn't make sense.
  • Try… John Smith, is a prosecutor in the division of Investigation for Especially Important Matters in the Criminal Justice Department at the Office of the Prosecutor General in the Republic of Cyprus.
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Too many!!!
John Smith, a prosecutor in the Investigation Division … …. no, this sentence doesn't make sense. Try…

John Smith, is a prosecutor in the division of Investigation for Especially Important Matters in the Criminal Justice Department at the Office of the Prosecutor General in the Republic of Cyprus.

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