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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Areas

This self-made expression is for a company profile. Could you please tell me if it is intelligible and sounds natural?
We operate as many as 250 shops in 4 areas, mainly in the greater London over extending locations up to Birmingham, Sheffield, and Liverpool.
  

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How about this? We operate about 250 shops in 4 areas. Our locations are mainly in greater London, but we also serve Birmingham, Sheffield and Liverpool.

  • How about this?
  • We operate about 250 shops in 4 areas.
  • Our locations are mainly in greater London, but we also serve Birmingham, Sheffield and Liverpool.
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How about this?
We operate about 250 shops in 4 areas. Our locations are mainly in greater London, but we also serve Birmingham, Sheffield and Liverpool.
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By the way, Greater London should be capitalized. It denotes a specific area in and around London that is administered by the Greater London Authority.
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Thank you very much for your advice.

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