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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Are words correctly used?

0I was at the lowest point in my life. For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face 01b01i00with 02i02b00such01b00 02b00animosity, whilst dealing with all the pressure all on my own. 02br
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00I would call home every day, seeking temporary solace from my parents and sisters, spending more than an hour on the phone. 02br
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00But the problems that I faced did not go away. I was not able to solve them, and the frustrations and depression 01i01b00was 02b02i00still deeply 01b01i00inset02i00 02b00within me. 02br
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01b00Are the words in bold correctly used? Is 'with' unecessary? Should 'was' be were'? Are there any parts that can be improved on? 02br
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01b00Thanks in advance.02b02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10I was at the lowest point in my life. For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face 11b 11i 10with12i 12b 11sup 11font 11i 10 12i 12font 12sup 10such11b 10 12b 10animosity, whilst dealing with all the pressure all on my own. 12br 12br 10I would call home every day, seeking temporary solace from my parents and sisters, spending more than an hour on the phone.

— Philip

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10I was at the lowest point in my life.
  • For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face 11b 11i 10with12i 12b 11sup 11font 11i 10 12i 12font 12sup 10such11b 10 12b 10animosity, whilst dealing with all the pressure all on my own.
  • 12br 12br 10I would call home every day, seeking temporary solace from my parents and sisters, spending more than an hour on the phone.
  • 12br 12br 10But the problems that I faced did not go away.
  • 12font 12sup 10 12b 10within me.
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01cite10Yoong Liat12cite10I was at the lowest point in my life. For the first time, I felt like I couldn’t breathe, having to face 11b11i10with12i12b11sup11font11i10 12i12font12sup10such11b10 12b10animos
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0 Many thanks, Philip, for your constructive comments.0-
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