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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
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Are 'with just a' and ',' (comma) correctly used in the statement? Please enlighten me. Thank you.

Are 'with just a' and ',' (comma) correctly used in the statement? Please enlighten me. Thank you.


Hannah had left me with just a letter saying she hadn’t needed me, telling me to forget her.

  

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Rommel Are 'with just a' and ',' (comma) correctly used in the statement? Yes. Aside from that, however, note that the first past perfect (had left) already establishes the time frame, so you don't need to continue with the past perfect a second time (hadn't needed).

  • Rommel Are 'with just a' and ',' (comma) correctly used in the statement?
  • Yes.
  • Aside from that, however, note that the first past perfect (had left) already establishes the time frame, so you don't need to continue with the past perfect a second time (hadn't needed).
  • I'd have written "...
  • ".
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RommelAre 'with just a' and ',' (comma) correctly used in the statement?

Yes.

Aside from that, however, note that the first past perfect (had left) already establishes the time frame, so you don't need to continue with the past perfect a second time (hadn't needed). I'd have written "... saying she didn't need me, telling me ...".

CJ

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