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Ayl Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Are ‘whose pleasing personality’ and ‘admires’ correctly used in this sentence?

Are ‘whose pleasing personality’ and ‘admires’ correctly used in this sentence? I think they really are.

Travis wrote a love letter addressed to a fictitious girl whose pleasing personality he admires.
  

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Your sentence is okay, but "addressed" is redundant.

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  • Your sentence is okay, but "addressed" is redundant.
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Your sentence is okay, but "addressed" is redundant.
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So, I must rewrite the sentence as follows, mustn't I?

Travis wrote a love letter to a fictitious girl whose pleasing personality he admires.
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