A man and a friend are watching a basketball game on TV. They cheer wildly. The man's wife comes into the living room.
Wife: Jeff. Can't you keep it down a bit?
Man: Are we too loud? / Are we too noisy? / Are we being too loud? / Are we making too much noise?
Wife: Yes you are.
Man: Okay. We'll try to keep it down, honey.
1) What would according to you be the most natural for the man's first line of dialog? (it doesn't have to be one of my suggestions) ?
2) Is the rest of the dialog natural as well?
Thank you.
anonymous 1) What would according to you be the most natural for the man's first line of dialog? (it doesn't have to be one of my suggestions) ? They are equally good, and I can't see how to improve on them.
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anonymous1) What would according to you be the most natural for the man's first line of dialog? (it doesn't have to be one of my suggestions) ?
They are equally good, and I can't see how to improve on them.
anonymous2) Is the rest of the dialog natural as well?
Yes, but put a comma after "Yes".
anonymousA man and a friend are watching a basketball game on TV. They cheer wildly. The man's wife comes into the living room.
Wife: Jeff. Can't you keep it down a bit?
Man: Are we too loud? / Are we too noisy? / Are we being too loud? / Are we making too much noise?
Wife: Yes you are.
Man: Okay. We'll try to keep it