Are tthese couple of sentences worded in the best way?

Drizzt and Dahlia made their way to the apartment of their drow companion Jarlaxle Baenre in order to see if he and the dwarf warrior Athrogate had survived the adventure in Gauntlgrym. The pair could find no sign of their missing comrades, and were soon attacked by pirates and thugs who served Ship Renthor, which sought revenge on Dahlia.