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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Are thrse two sentences correctly worded?
Once the goddess departed, Quenthel told the assembled drow nobles that House Baenre and House Fey Branche were now close allies, Gromph and Minolin would be married, and the pair’s daughter would be trained as her successor, named Yvonnel, and imparted with the knowledge and sensibilities of the dead matron mother.
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cboutin3 Once the goddess departed, Quenthel told the assembled drow nobles that House Baenre and House Fey Branche were now close allies, that Gromph and Minolin would be married, and that the pair’s daughter would be trained as her successor, named Yvonnel, and imparted with the knowledge and sensibilities of the dead matron mother. I think these are needed because you have a combined description at the end. and imparted with...
- cboutin3 Once the goddess departed, Quenthel told the assembled drow nobles that House Baenre and House Fey Branche were now close allies, that Gromph and Minolin would be married, and that the pair’s daughter would be trained as her successor, named Yvonnel, and imparted with the knowledge and sensibilities of the dead matron mother.
- I think these are needed because you have a combined description at the end.
- and imparted with...
- ] This is separate from the "list" you have created.
- I hope this makes sense.
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cboutin3 Once the goddess departed, Quenthel told the assembled drow nobles that House Baenre and House Fey Branche were now close allies, that Gromph and Minolin would be married, and that the pair’s daughter would be trained as her successor, named Yvonnel, and imparted with the knowle
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