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Belly Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Are those sentence grammatically correct?
Is was nurturing the perfect tense for this sentence? Obiviously I can use the past tense, but I think adding a past continuous will make the sentence sound more continuous
Glorious summer seems to have passed half way already. I now got 24 hours a day to fulfill the dream I was nurturing during the previous school year
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" I think you mean, "I now have 24 hours a day . " The logical connection between the first and second sentences is weak. What do you mean to make of the two time factors ( passed , and now )?
- " I think you mean, "I now have 24 hours a day .
- " The logical connection between the first and second sentences is weak.
- What do you mean to make of the two time factors ( passed , and now )?
- The reader is expecting a point.
- Are you possibly saying that when school let out and your vacation began, the summer was already half spent?
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I agree with you about "was nurturing."
I think you mean, "I now have 24 hours a day . . ."
The logical connection between the first and second sentences is weak. What do you mean to make of the two time factors (passed, and now)? The reader is expecting a point. Are you possibly saying that when school let out and your vacation began, the summer was a
I think you mean, "I now have 24 hours a day . . ."
The logical connection between the first and second sentences is weak. What do you mean to make of the two time factors (passed, and now)? The reader is expecting a point. Are you possibly saying that when school let out and your vacation began, the summer was a
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