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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences worded properly?

A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Alhana and her companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes. Alhana and Porthios chose to lead the griffon forces to Khur to rescue the elves, and they left the Kagonesti chief Nalaryn behind to maintain the rebellion in Qualinesti.
  

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Exemplary use of comma and repeated subject.

— Philip

  • Exemplary use of comma and repeated subject.
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Exemplary use of comma and repeated subject.
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