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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences worded in the best way?

FYI- Stedd is the Chosen. The second magical ritual ended the Turmishan famine by causing food to instantly grow all across the nation. Although the rites saved Turmish, completing the great works of magic drained Stedd and the Emerald Enclave of a lot of their mystical strength, and Lathander’s young Chosen was so weakened that he even fell into a coma-like state.
  

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