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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences worded correctly?
Shortly thereafter, Stedd convinced Umara to free him and Anton and assist him in completing his mission for Lathander, who wanted the boy to quickly journey to the Turmish city of Sapra. Once Umara released the two, she and Anton confronted Kymas and managed to kill the vampire after a vicious fight on the ship’s deck.
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Thanks for your help, I revised these sentences somewhat so how are they now?
Shortly thereafter, Stedd convinced Umara to free him and Anton and assist him in completing his mission for Lathander, who wanted the boy to quickly journey to the Turmish city of Sapra. Anton had also befriend Stedd and decided to assist him, and once Umara released the two, she and Anton confronted Kymas and manag
Shortly thereafter, Stedd convinced Umara to free him and Anton and assist him in completing his mission for Lathander, who wanted the boy to quickly journey to the Turmish city of Sapra. Anton had also befriend Stedd and decided to assist him, and once Umara released the two, she and Anton confronted Kymas and manag
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