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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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With the lower races getting the signal to rebel at the same time as Pharaun escaped the renegades’ hideout, the wizard swiftly gathered the forces of Menzoberranzan to fight the uprising. In the bloody battle that ensued, the insurrection of the renegade males and lesser races was crushed by the physical and arcane strengths of Menzoberranzan.
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The lower races received the signal to rebel at the same time as Pharaun escaped the renegades’ hideout, and the wizard swiftly gathered the forces of Menzoberranzan to fight the uprising. In the ****** battle that ensued, the insurrection of the renegade males and lesser races was crushed by the physical and spiritual strengths of Menzoberranzan.
- The lower races received the signal to rebel at the same time as Pharaun escaped the renegades’ hideout, and the wizard swiftly gathered the forces of Menzoberranzan to fight the uprising.
- In the ****** battle that ensued, the insurrection of the renegade males and lesser races was crushed by the physical and spiritual strengths of Menzoberranzan.
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The lower races received the signal to rebel at the same time as Pharaun escaped the renegades’ hideout, and the wizard swiftly gathered the forces of Menzoberranzan to fight the uprising. In the ****** battle that ensued, the insurrection of the renegade males and lesser races was crushed by the physical and spiritual strengths of Menzoberranzan.
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