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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Are these two sentences using 'maintaining...' correct?
Are these two sentences using 'maintaining...' correct?
1. Teenage couples can eventually become well-rounded individuals by maintaining a healthy balance between relationship and friendships.
2. Teenage couples can eventually become well-rounded individuals by maintaining both relationship and friendships equally.
1. Teenage couples can eventually become well-rounded individuals by maintaining a healthy balance between relationship and friendships.
2. Teenage couples can eventually become well-rounded individuals by maintaining both relationship and friendships equally.
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Those sentences are unnatural.
- Those sentences are unnatural.
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Please help me make them sound natural. I really don't know how, teechr. :C
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RommelTeenage couples can eventually become well-rounded individualsWhy "eventually?" I don't see why teenage couples can't be well-rounded people as teenagers!
Also, the second part of those sentences is confusing.
Try,
A teenage couple should be able to maintain a healthy balance between their relationship with each other, on the one hand, an
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