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FYI- Szass Tam is the lich. When the riots progressed, Szass Tam used magic to appear in multiple places around Eltabbar and quelled the fighting, further endearing him to the capital’s common people. Fearing the power of Szass Tam and his intentions now that his original plot had failed, Dmitra ordered Malark to discover the lich’s newest plans.