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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences properly worded?

Following the battle, Stedd chose to stay in Sapra for a time to learn from the three Chosen of Silvanus, and Anton decided that he would accompany Umara when she returned to Thay. Also at that time, the rains that had fallen in Turmish for months finally ended and the sun emerged over the realm.
  

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cboutin3 the rains that had fallen in Turmish for months finally ended , and the sun emerged over the realm. Change of subject and verb.....

  • cboutin3 the rains that had fallen in Turmish for months finally ended , and the sun emerged over the realm.
  • Change of subject and verb.....
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cboutin3 the rains that had fallen in Turmish for months finally ended, and the sun emerged over the realm.
Change of subject and verb.....

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