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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences properly worded?

FYI- Kymas is the undead mage, and both him and Umara are the Red Wizards. Kymas and Umara traveled on a Thayan ship to Immurk’s Hold on Pirate Isle, where the undead mage, who was the senior of the two Red Wizards, ordered Umara to speak with Evendur. Umara met with Evendur in the temple of Umberlee to present him with Szass’s offer of an alliance between Thay and the Umberlants.
  

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My suggestion: ... and both he and Umara are the Red Wizards. .

  • My suggestion: ...
  • and both he and Umara are the Red Wizards.
  • .
  • told/instructed Umara to speak with Evendur.
  • Tom
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My suggestion:

... and both he and Umara are the Red Wizards.
....told/instructed Umara to speak with Evendur.

Tom

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