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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences properly worded?

Although she was allowed to join on the legacy of her name, she quickly rose in the ranks on her own merits of courage, ambition, tenacity, and deep devotion to the principles of honor. By the age of twenty, Linsha entered the Order of the Rose, becoming the first non-Solamnic woman and one of the youngest knights to attain the highly respected rank.
  

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and one of the youngest knights needs commas around it.

— Philip

  • and one of the youngest knights needs commas around it.
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...and one of the youngest knights needs commas around it.
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