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Kedra Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Are these two sentences grammatically correct? Thank you!

1i00Hi everybody, the below passage aims at emphasizing the fact that if you are the owner of the web site, deciated to one specific country/city property leasing, it's easy and safe for you to collect payments from property owners who want to advertise themselves at your web site. And if you are the owner of the web site dedicated to international property leasing, it's not very convenient sometimes to arrange regular and safe payments for advertising at your web site from all over the world. I would appreciate if someone could take a look at the grammar and style. Thank you!02i00 02br
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01font01font00If you charge property owners for listing their properties on your small vacation rental website, it’s easier for you to collect payments from them. Local transactions are easier, faster and more secure than payments from all over the World at international vacation rental web portals.02font00 02font0-
  

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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Kedra12cite 11i 10Hi everybody, the below passage aims at emphasizing the fact that if you are the owner of the web site, deciated to one specific country/city property leasing, it's easy and safe for you to collect payments from property owners who want to advertise themselves at your web site. And if you are the owner of the web site dedicated to international property leasing, it's not very convenient sometimes to arrange regular and safe payments for advertising at your web site from all over the world. I would appreciate if someone could take a look at the grammar and style.

— Philip

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Kedra12cite 11i 10Hi everybody, the below passage aims at emphasizing the fact that if you are the owner of the web site, deciated to one specific country/city property leasing, it's easy and safe for you to collect payments from property owners who want to advertise themselves at your web site.
  • And if you are the owner of the web site dedicated to international property leasing, it's not very convenient sometimes to arrange regular and safe payments for advertising at your web site from all over the world.
  • I would appreciate if someone could take a look at the grammar and style.
  • 12i 10 12br 12br 11b 12b 12br 12br 11b 11font 10“Closer” money 12font 12b 12br 12br 11b 12b 12br 12br 11font 11font 10If you charge property owners for listing their properties on your small vacation rental website, it’s easier for you to collect payments from them.
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01cite10Kedra12cite11i10Hi everybody, the below passage aims at emphasizing the fact that if you are the owner of the web site, deciated to one specific country/city property leasing, it's easy and safe for you to collect payments from property owners who want to advertise themselves at your web site. And if you are the owner of t
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0 I am surprised that it's correct. Thank you for checking! I appreciate this. [Y] 0-
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21b21font20I'm not very versed in $$ or website matters, but this looks fine to me.22font22b20 21b21font
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0 I am not sure I know why it turned out as aster-kisses, but I did understand the 00message00, so it's ok! [6] 0-
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