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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences correctly worded?
After gathering additional information from Regis, Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason that the city fell was because something melted the permafrost beneath it, sucking the entire city and its population underground. Even after Regis and Nanfoodle revealed this information to Bruenor, the dwarf king was still determined to continue the war against the orcs.
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Yes, it's okay. In the phrase, Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason that the city fell you can leave out one of the thats. It will make it flow better.
- Yes, it's okay.
- In the phrase, Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason that the city fell you can leave out one of the thats.
- It will make it flow better.
- Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason the city fell
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Yes, it's okay. 
In the phrase,
Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason that the city fell
you can leave
In the phrase,Nanfoodle discerned that the only reason that the city fell
you can leave
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