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Being imparted with Yvonnel’s memories essentially transformed Quenthel into her mighty mother, and she now understood Lolth’s newest plans. Quenthel realized that one of the sources of the Spider Queen’s rage was the drow ranger Drizzt Do'Urden, an enemy of Menzoberranzan, but one whom the goddess had unsuccessfully tried to corrupt in an attempt to wound his patron goddess Mielikki, the Forest Queen.