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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences correctly worded?

FYI- Kymas is the vampire. Stedd was able to seriously wound Evendur and force him to flee, but he was then once again imprisoned by Kymas. Anton opposed Stedd’s incarcerated by dark magic and tried to stop Kymas, but he was quickly incapacitated by the vampire and Umara and was imprisoned himself.
  

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Stedd’s incarcerated --- incarceration ? probably a mistake caused by cut-and-paste.

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  • Stedd’s incarcerated --- incarceration ?
  • probably a mistake caused by cut-and-paste.
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Stedd’s incarcerated ---incarceration?
vampire and Umara and was imprisoned - I think you can fix this...probably a mistake caused by cut-and-paste.
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Thanks for your help, how is this revision? Anton opposed Stedd’s incarceration by dark magic and tried to stop Kymas, but the reaver was quickly incapacitated by the undead wizard and Umara, and he was imprisoned himself.
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That takes care of it.
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