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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these two sentences all correctly worded?

In 18 PC, the Kingpriest turned the Tower into a repository for artifacts of the gods of darkness. Eventually, the Tower also became filled with relics of the gods of neutrality and all those of the not recognized faiths of the gods of light.
  

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cboutin3 In 18 PC, the Kingpriest turned the Tower into a repository for artifacts of the gods of darkness. Eventually, the Tower also became filled with relics of the gods of neutrality and all those of the not recognized faiths of the gods of light. I'm confused.

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  • cboutin3 In 18 PC, the Kingpriest turned the Tower into a repository for artifacts of the gods of darkness.
  • Eventually, the Tower also became filled with relics of the gods of neutrality and all those of the not recognized faiths of the gods of light.
  • I'm confused.
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cboutin3 In 18 PC, the Kingpriest turned the Tower into a repository for artifacts of the gods of darkness. Eventually, the Tower also became filled with relics of the gods of neutrality and all those of the not recognized faiths of the gods of light.
I'm confused.
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Yeah I thought that end part needed fixing. How about this revision: Eventually, the Tower also became filled with relics of the gods of neutrality and variations of the gods of light that the Kingpriest claimed were not pure.
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That meets my needs.
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