Are these two sentences 100% correct?
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I wrote these two sentences but before I send this text to a client could anyone please let me know if there are any grammar errors to be found? I very much appreciate it! I wrote this carefully, but if there's anything I've missed please get in touch. Thanks again!
"One of the largest yachts on display will be the 54m three-masted classic schooner Shenandoah of Sark, built in 1902. The impeccably maintained Shenandoah is not only the epitome of timeless elegance, but with her historic pedigree also a remarkable yacht to have at the show.”
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Sounds pretty good. I would make a couple of small changes, as follows: "One of the largest yachts on display will be the 54m , three-masted , classic schooner , Shenandoah of Sark, built in 1902. ”
- Sounds pretty good.
- I would make a couple of small changes, as follows: "One of the largest yachts on display will be the 54m , three-masted , classic schooner , Shenandoah of Sark, built in 1902.
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Sounds pretty good. I would make a couple of small changes, as follows:
"One of the largest yachts on display will be the 54m, three-masted, classic schooner, Shenandoah of Sark, built in 1902. The impeccably maintained Shenandoah is not only the epitome of timeless elegance but, with her historic pedigree, is also a remarkable yacht to have
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