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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these three sentences worded correctly?

Following the dream vestige’s defeat, the Council’s fleet rallied and the battle swiftly turned in their favor. Realizing that his forces would inevitably be defeated, Szass Tam ordered his remaining ships to withdraw while his undead aquatic and flying minions covered the retreat. After the battle, Aoth and Brightwing found Bareris floating in the sea, but the bard had been transformed into an undead entity by the energies of undeath that had bound the dream vestige.
  

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that had bound the dream vestige. This seemed a bit odd to me, but if it makes sense to you, you probably don't have to worry about it.

— Philip

  • that had bound the dream vestige.
  • This seemed a bit odd to me, but if it makes sense to you, you probably don't have to worry about it.
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that had bound the dream vestige.
This seemed a bit odd to me, but if it makes sense to you, you probably don't have to worry about it.
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Yeah it makes sense if you know about the fantasy world I am writing about but thanks!
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cboutin3Yeah it makes sense if you know about the fantasy world I am writing about but thanks!
That's why I didn't try to correct it.
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