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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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FYI- Szass Tam is the lich. At the same time as Szass Tam’s massive army began to besiege the Keep of Sorrows, two messengers from Hezass managed to reach the fortress. The couriers, Red Wizards named Muthoth and So-Kehur, told Nular Zurn, the castellan of the keep, that Hezass and his host was moving into a position to strike the lich’s forces in concert with the Council’s legions. However, unbeknownst to the Keep of Sorrows’ garrison, Muthoth and So-Kehur were actually necromancers serving Szass Tam and Hezass intended to betray the zulkirs.
  

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cboutin3 FYI- Szass Tam is the lich. At the same time as that Szass Tam’s massive army began to besiege the Keep of Sorrows, two messengers from Hezass managed to reach the fortress. The couriers, Red Wizards named Muthoth and So-Kehur, told Nular Zurn, the castellan of the keep, that Hezass and his host was were moving into a position to strike the lich’s forces in concert with the Council’s legions.

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  • cboutin3 FYI- Szass Tam is the lich.
  • At the same time as that Szass Tam’s massive army began to besiege the Keep of Sorrows, two messengers from Hezass managed to reach the fortress.
  • The couriers, Red Wizards named Muthoth and So-Kehur, told Nular Zurn, the castellan of the keep, that Hezass and his host was were moving into a position to strike the lich’s forces in concert with the Council’s legions.
  • However, unbeknownst to the Keep of Sorrows’ garrison, Muthoth and So-Kehur were actually necromancers serving Szass Tam and Hezass intended to betray the zulkirs.
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cboutin3 FYI- Szass Tam is the lich. At the same time as that Szass Tam’s massive army began to besiege the Keep of Sorrows, two messengers from Hezass managed to reach the fortress. The couriers, Red Wizards named Muthoth and So-Kehur, told Nular Zurn, the castellan of the keep, that Hezass and his host was
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