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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Are these setences grammatically correct?

It has been reported that the following supplied track light was found to be not working upon installation, because the ballast of the tracking light was found to be defect. We need to replace this unit or ask the supplier to replace the defective part immediately.
  

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It has been reported that T he following supplied track light we recently received was found to be not working upon installation, because the ballast of the tracking light was found to be defect ive . We need to replace this unit or ask the supplier to replace the defective part immediately. " is generally superfluous and does not contribute any additional meaning.

  • It has been reported that T he following supplied track light we recently received was found to be not working upon installation, because the ballast of the tracking light was found to be defect ive .
  • We need to replace this unit or ask the supplier to replace the defective part immediately.
  • " is generally superfluous and does not contribute any additional meaning.
  • In business language, it is bets to be short, direct, and to the point.
  • Don't use any more words than necessary.
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It has been reported that The following supplied track light we recently received was found to be not working upon installation, because the ballast of the tracking light was found to be defective. We need to replace this unit or ask the supplier to replace the defective part immediately.

The starting phrase "It has been reporte

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