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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences worded in the proper way?

FYI- Feal-Thas is the elf. In the frigid realm, Feal-Thas managed to form an alliance with the ogres of Daltigoth, through betrayal of the Ice Folk who had once taken him in. The elf engineered the slaughter of his former lover and her people, and then took their lands as his own.
  

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I would omit the commas after Daltigoth and people.

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I would omit the commas after Daltigoth and people.
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