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When the Octopus arrived in Sapra, Stedd, Umara, and Anton made their way to the House of Silvanus, the main stronghold of the Turmishan druidic order known as the Emerald Enclave. The order was led by the Elder Circle, which consisted of three Chosen of Silvanus, the Forest Father. The three friends met with two members of the Elder Circle, the half-elf Ashenford Torinblow and the human Shinthala Deepcrest, and Stedd informed them that he had come to save Turmish in its time of need by working together with the Emerald Enclave.