Are these sentences worded in the correct way?

FYI- Dahlia is the elf and Alegni is the tiefling and Netherese lord. Entreri was thrilled to discover this information and hoped to use Dahlia’s hatred of Alegni to coax the elf warrior and Drizzt into aiding him in acquiring his freedom from the Netherese lord. Dahlia had considered that her business in the region was finished because Sylora was dead, but once she learned of Alegni, she vowed to kill the tiefling.