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FYI- Menzoberranzan is the drow city. Through Zaknafein’s tutelage, Drizzt developed the dual-wielding fighting style that was common among the drow and became an incredibly talented fighter for his age. As Drizzt neared the end of his training with Zaknafein, one of the lesser House of Menzoberranzan unsuccessfully attacked another. Drizzt was shocked by the brutal reality of the event and the so-called justice that was enacted by the city’s Ruling Council, and he would forever hold this against drow society.