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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences worded in the best way?

FYI- Szass Tam is the lich. While the undead were laying waste to eastern Thay, Nymia and Aoth were summoned to Eltabbar to meet with Szass Tam, the three zulkirs who were allied with the lich (Samas Kul; Yaphyll, the zulkir of Divination; and Lallara, the zulkir of Abjuration), and Iphegor Nath, the High Flamelord, the head of the church of Kossuth, the Firelord. After she and Aoth provided the five lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, Nymia told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders.
  

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cboutin3 Abjuration) ; and Iphegor Nath, the High Flamelord, the head of the church of Kossuth, the Firelord I think you want another semi-colon.

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  • cboutin3 Abjuration) ; and Iphegor Nath, the High Flamelord, the head of the church of Kossuth, the Firelord I think you want another semi-colon.
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cboutin3Abjuration); and Iphegor Nath, the High Flamelord, the head of the church of Kossuth, the Firelord
I think you want another semi-colon.
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Thanks for all your help. I didn't think a semi-colon should go there because the names in parentheses are a separate list, they are the lich Szass Tam's allies.
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Just checking, because I wasn't sure.
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