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Mina asked Galdar for his sword in order to strike down the defenseless Valthonis, but the one-armed minotaur told Mina that he honestly believed that she should not take Takhisis’s place in the pantheon or kill Valthonis in cold blood. Wishing to have no more to do with the proceedings, Galdar walked away, but Mina leapt after the minotaur, attacked him in a rage, and beat him senseless.