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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Are these sentences worded correctly?
Catti-brie’s magical talents brought her to the attention of Lady Avelyere, a powerful Netherese sorceress who was the leader of an arcane academy known as the Coven. Avelyere and several of her students abducted Catti-brie and took her to Shade Enclave, where they convinced her to join the magical school. Since Catti-brie missed her parents, Avelyere would occasionally allow her to return to her tribe. During these visits, Catti-brie would receive magical training from her parents.
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They're very good. If I had to nitpick (and I do), you could think about your use of magical . e.
- They're very good.
- If I had to nitpick (and I do), you could think about your use of magical .
- e.
- it has magical properties.
- For example, magical training could imply training that is itself magical; training in magic would be more accurate.
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They're very good.
If I had to nitpick (and I do), you could think about your use of magical. I guess you're referring to skills in performing magic, but magical followed by a noun can imply that the noun itself is magical, i.e. it has magical properties. For example, magical training could imply training that is itself magical; training in magic would be more
If I had to nitpick (and I do), you could think about your use of magical. I guess you're referring to skills in performing magic, but magical followed by a noun can imply that the noun itself is magical, i.e. it has magical properties. For example, magical training could imply training that is itself magical; training in magic would be more
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