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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Are these sentences using 'punch back,' 'fairy godmother,' and 'while' acceptable?

Are these sentences using 'punch back,' 'fairy godmother,' and 'while' acceptable?

When there’s a problem, you just have to punch back because there’s no fairy godmother in this world. Just enjoy life while you can.
  

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" I also don't see the connection between the two sentences.

  • " I also don't see the connection between the two sentences.
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The first sentence is unnatural, especially the use of "punch back" and "fairy godmother." I also don't see the connection between the two sentences.

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