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Rommel Posted 8 years ago
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Are these sentences using 'knowledge' and 'concerning/about' acceptable?

Are these sentences using 'knowledge' and 'concerning/about' acceptable?

1. A symposium attended by my cousins aimed to equip them with additional knowledge in making wise decisions on their future career paths.
2. The symposium helped enlighten my cousins concerning/about the careers they had to take.

  

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1. A symposium attended by my cousins aimed to equip them with the additional knowledge for making wise decisions about their future career paths. 2.

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  • A symposium attended by my cousins aimed to equip them with the additional knowledge for making wise decisions about their future career paths.
  • 2.
  • The symposium helped enlighten my cousins to decide what careers would best suit their interests and abilities.
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1. A symposium attended by my cousins aimed to equip them with the additional knowledge for making wise decisions about their future career paths.
2. The symposium helped enlighten my cousins to decide what careers would best suit their interests and abilities.

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