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Marinafed Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Are these sentences right?
Bad weather can really affect your mood, (can't) it? Most of us get depressed at some point (during) the winter and we can not wait for spring to come. For some people (however) those dark cold winter days can cause real medical problems.
doctors have (produced) acondition which is (known) as SAD. and it can be a big problem in countries. SAD sufferers find it difficult to (concentrate) often feel depressed or anxious their behavior affects the people around them.
Bright light affects the chemistry of the brain although scientists do not understand (exactly) how. the first is to travel to a country that has a warm (climate) with bright, sunny winters. the second is to use (artificial) light.
doctors have (produced) acondition which is (known) as SAD. and it can be a big problem in countries. SAD sufferers find it difficult to (concentrate) often feel depressed or anxious their behavior affects the people around them.
Bright light affects the chemistry of the brain although scientists do not understand (exactly) how. the first is to travel to a country that has a warm (climate) with bright, sunny winters. the second is to use (artificial) light.
Top answer
The only mistake is "produced". You could say "identified". There are many punctuation problems, which you may be aware of.
- The only mistake is "produced".
- You could say "identified".
- There are many punctuation problems, which you may be aware of.
- Kind regards, Michael
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The only mistake is "produced". You could say "identified". There are many punctuation problems, which you may be aware of. Kind regards, Michael
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Can I use one fo these words "developed or discovered or invented" instead of "produced"?
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"developed" is wrong because they have not changed the condition into something better, or contracted the condition personally (both possible usages of develop)
"discover" is not really right because they knew about the factors for the syndrome already but just related them to each other in a new way.
"invent" is OK for the name but of the condition (though it would sound strange
"discover" is not really right because they knew about the factors for the syndrome already but just related them to each other in a new way.
"invent" is OK for the name but of the condition (though it would sound strange
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Actually - no clear aetiology - not pathology.
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