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Guest Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Are these sentences right?
0 Last summer, helping my mother clear the attic of our old house, I came across a box with the notes for the workshop in it. [Refers to a workshop already mentioned in the text] 02 br
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00 Our teacher, who insisted on being called Pinkie so much I have forgotten her real name, was a small woman with a big voice who scribbled on the blackboard non-stop. 02 br
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00 Are they clear enough? How can I make them better? Thank you ! 0-
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00 Our teacher, who insisted on being called Pinkie so much I have forgotten her real name, was a small woman with a big voice who scribbled on the blackboard non-stop. 02 br
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00 Are they clear enough? How can I make them better? Thank you ! 0-
Top answer
0 I think they are fine, Guest. The second sentence needs a comma after 'voice', and 'much' should be changed to 'often' or 'adamantly' or another more specific (and appropriate) adverb. 0-
- 0 I think they are fine, Guest.
- The second sentence needs a comma after 'voice', and 'much' should be changed to 'often' or 'adamantly' or another more specific (and appropriate) adverb.
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0 I think they are fine, Guest. The second sentence needs a comma after 'voice', and 'much' should be changed to 'often' or 'adamantly' or another more specific (and appropriate) adverb. 0-
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