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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences properly worded?

FYI- Mina is the prophet. After Mina gained the support of the Dark Knight forces besieging Sanction, Galdar departed on a mission for the prophet to give new orders to Dogah, a general in the evil knighthood. Galdar informed Dogah that Mina wanted him to disobey the commands of Morham Targonne, the Lord of the Night, by sending his troops to the elven nation of Silvanesti, where his forces would meet up with Mina’s own.
  

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This is fine. I'm still doing a double-take when I see 'elven', thinking it should be 'eleven'.

  • This is fine.
  • I'm still doing a double-take when I see 'elven', thinking it should be 'eleven'.
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This is fine. I'm still doing a double-take when I see 'elven', thinking it should be 'eleven'. Emotion: surprise

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