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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences properly worded?

Battered and worn from his journey, Vinas forged into the wilderness, until eventually he discovered a glade with a monolith of granite rising from the center. There, he fasted and prayed to the gods of light to help him find the answer to his problem.
  

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Very good. Do I notice an attempt on your part not to try to get so much information into a single sentence?

  • Very good.
  • Do I notice an attempt on your part not to try to get so much information into a single sentence?
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Very good. Do I notice an attempt on your part not to try to get so much information into a single sentence?
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Thanks and yes I am. Your advice has really benefited my writing.

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