Are these sentences perfect?

Ted walks over to his mini cooper, an old English car, which stands out against all of the modern American cars parked next to it. He has the pile of disordered research papers in hand, which look as though they are going to blow away in the strong wind. After a struggle, he eventually opens the door of his mini, and climbs inside, throwing his papers onto the back seat. He sits for a moment, takes a deep breath, places his hands on the steering wheel, and is startled by the noise of his ringing cell phone. While holding his cell phone, he looks at the name of the caller on the screen, and sees the name Miguel.

Could these sentences be changed to be even more perfect?