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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences OK or awkwardly long?

Susan drops her kids off at school and watches them go with a look full of affection and gratitude.

Susan drops her kids off at school and watches them go with a look of deep affection and gratitude.


1) Are these sentences OK or awkwardly long?

2) Which one of them would you prefer?

  

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anonymous 1) Are these sentences OK or awkwardly long? They are not long, and they are fine. anonymous 2) Which one of them would you prefer?

— Anonymous

  • anonymous 1) Are these sentences OK or awkwardly long?
  • They are not long, and they are fine.
  • anonymous 2) Which one of them would you prefer?
  • "Do" you prefer.
  • "Would" sounds like I can have one to take home with me.
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anonymous1) Are these sentences OK or awkwardly long?

They are not long, and they are fine.

anonymous2) Which one of them would you prefer?

"Do" you prefer. "Would" sounds like I can have one to take home with me.

Number 1 is better because adjectives stink, mostly. To say that her affection is deep qualifies

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