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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Are these sentences naturally sound?

As your aware, we have collected 50 frames from the client, but we have shipped only 12 frames to their overseas project. The remaining frames are still in our store. These frames taking lot of our spaces in the stores, so we can't cope with the current increase in shipments are arriving for other projects. This would impact our storage capacity. We can't accept our shipments unless we return it or find some solution on this.
  

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Anonymous As your aware, As you are aware, / As you're aware, Anonymous These frames taking lot of our spaces in the stores, These frames are taking up a lot of our storage space, Anonymous so we can't cope with the current increase in shipments are arriving for other projects making it difficult for us to accommodate incoming shipments for other projects. Anonymous This would impact our storage capacity. We can't accept our shipments unless we return it or find some solution on this.

  • Anonymous As your aware, As you are aware, / As you're aware, Anonymous These frames taking lot of our spaces in the stores, These frames are taking up a lot of our storage space, Anonymous so we can't cope with the current increase in shipments are arriving for other projects making it difficult for us to accommodate incoming shipments for other projects.
  • Anonymous This would impact our storage capacity.
  • We can't accept our shipments unless we return it or find some solution on this.
  • (I'm not sure what you're proposing here.
  • ) Please see if more frames can be shipped to the overseas project, or if some other solution can be worked out, such as returning some of the frames to the client.
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AnonymousAs your aware,
As you are aware, / As you're aware,
AnonymousThese frames taking lot of our spaces in the stores,
These frames are taking up a lot of our storage space,
Anonymousso we can't cope with the current increase in shipments are arriving for other projects
making it diffi
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Thank you for your help me to correct my sentences.

50 frames were collected, but we used only 12 in their project. The remaining frames need to be returned to them due to lack of space in the stores.

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