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Musicgold Posted 15 years ago
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Are these sentences natural? September 29
Hi,
Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?
1. This is another variable in your portfolio on which you have no control. ( I am not sure if it is clear that the ‘no control’ part applies to the variable.)
2. The Greece bond market is not much deep and is feared as easy to shut down in a crisis.
3. This rule is not a function of whether the customer is existing or new.
Thanks,
MG.
Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?
1. This is another variable in your portfolio on which you have no control. ( I am not sure if it is clear that the ‘no control’ part applies to the variable.)
2. The Greece bond market is not much deep and is feared as easy to shut down in a crisis.
3. This rule is not a function of whether the customer is existing or new.
Thanks,
MG.
Top answer
1. This is another variable in your portfolio over which you have no control. -- I agree.
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- This is another variable in your portfolio over which you have no control.
- -- I agree.
- Recast : This is another portfolio variable over which you have no control.
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1. This is another variable in your portfolio over which you have no control. ( I am not sure if it is clear that the ‘no control’ part applies to the variable.-- I agree. Recast: This is another portfolio variable over which you have no control.)
2. The market for Greek bonds is not very deep, and it is feared that it will shut down quickly i
2. The market for Greek bonds is not very deep, and it is feared that it will shut down quickly i
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