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Musicgold Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences natural? October 7

Hi,

Are the following sentences natural to a native ear?

1. If you find a problem with the line feel free to bring it to my attention. I would not feel bad if you pointed my flaws, as you would be at least being honest with me.



2. I want to request just one thing. If you ever realize that I would not be making the team, please let me know, so I will not be wasting my time on this.



3. Is our meeting tomorrow still good? ( I wanted to confirm tomorrow’s meeting)

Thanks,

MG.
  

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1. If you find a problem with the line feel free to bring it to my attention. I will not feel bad if you point out my flaws, as you would be at least being honest with me.

— MalRey

  • 1.
  • If you find a problem with the line feel free to bring it to my attention.
  • I will not feel bad if you point out my flaws, as you would be at least being honest with me.
  • 2.
  • I want to request just one thing.
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1. If you find a problem with the line feel free to bring it to my attention. I will not feel bad if you point out my flaws, as you would be at least being honest with me.



2. I want to request just one thing
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Thanks MalRey.

1. If you find a problem with the line feel free to bring it to my attention. I will not feel bad if you point out my flaws, as you would be at least being honest with me.
Shouldn't we change 'as you would' to 'as you will' so that
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