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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are these sentences natural and meaningful?
If the army accepted the man who behaves in a dainty, enchanting manner, he would not last for a long time there. Only a manly man can serve longer in the army.
Please correct my writing. Are the sentences natural and meaningful? Thanks in advance.
Please correct my writing. Are the sentences natural and meaningful? Thanks in advance.
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If the army accepted a recruit who behaved effeminately, he would not last for long. Only a virile man can serve long in the army.
- If the army accepted a recruit who behaved effeminately, he would not last for long.
- Only a virile man can serve long in the army.
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If the army accepted a recruit who behaved effeminately, he would not last for long. Only a virile man can serve long in the army.
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