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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Are these sentences in the past tense
Can you look over my bullet points for my resume and and see if it is in the past tense.
* Sole analyst responsible for monitoring a 16 state territory for newly issued municipal securities
* Ensured the timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Company's" database
* Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, financial advisors, investment bankers, and trustees to confirm information and procure documents for newly issued securities
* Maintained an intimate understanding of municipal security terms and conditions to serve as a resource for any questions from other departments regarding municipal securities
* Analyzed accuracy of newly issued municipal security terms and conditions for all U.S territories
Thanks so much!
* Sole analyst responsible for monitoring a 16 state territory for newly issued municipal securities
* Ensured the timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Company's" database
* Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, financial advisors, investment bankers, and trustees to confirm information and procure documents for newly issued securities
* Maintained an intimate understanding of municipal security terms and conditions to serve as a resource for any questions from other departments regarding municipal securities
* Analyzed accuracy of newly issued municipal security terms and conditions for all U.S territories
Thanks so much!
Top answer
It needs whittling: bulleted items are more akin to headlines than sentences: * Was sole analyst responsible for monitoring 16-state territory for new municipal securities * Ensured timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Compa ny " database * Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, financial advisors, investment bankers, and trustees to confirm information and procure security documents * Maintai ned int imate understanding of municipal security terms and conditions to support other departments * Analyzed accuracy of municipal security terms and conditions for all US territories
- It needs whittling: bulleted items are more akin to headlines than sentences: * Was sole analyst responsible for monitoring 16-state territory for new municipal securities * Ensured timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Compa ny " database * Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, financial advisors, investment bankers, and trustees to confirm information and procure security documents * Maintai ned int imate understanding of municipal security terms and conditions to support other departments * Analyzed accuracy of municipal security terms and conditions for all US territories
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It needs whittling: bulleted items are more akin to headlines than sentences:
* Was sole analyst responsible for monitoring 16-state territory for new municipal securities
* Ensured timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Company" database
* Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, fina
* Was sole analyst responsible for monitoring 16-state territory for new municipal securities
* Ensured timely and accurate upload of over 140 municipal security data points into "Company" database
* Communicated closely with underwriters, legal counsels, fina
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