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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Are these sentences grmmatically correct?

Please look at the sentences bellows and advise me if they are grammatically worded

I would like to cash out 10 days from my leave entitlement. Please arrange for this payment as soon as possible.

I would appreciate send me an updated leave entitlement details thereafter reflecting this encashment.

  

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anonymous I would like to cash out 10 days from my leave entitlement. I would appreciate send me an updated leave entitlement details thereafter reflecting this encashment. I would write it like this: I would like to cash out ten days of my leave entitlement as soon as possible.

  • anonymous I would like to cash out 10 days from my leave entitlement.
  • I would appreciate send me an updated leave entitlement details thereafter reflecting this encashment.
  • I would write it like this: I would like to cash out ten days of my leave entitlement as soon as possible.
  • I would also appreciate it if you could include with the payment an updated statement of leave entitlement details showing the status of my account after this withdrawal.
  • CJ
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anonymousI would like to cash out 10 days from my leave entitlement. Please arrange for this payment as soon as possible.I would appreciate send me an updated leave entitlement details thereafter reflecting this encashment.

I would write it like this:

I would like to cash out ten days of my leave entitlement as soon as pos

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