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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

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We noticed that that you haven't amended the clause 12 in the contract as discussed. We are not responsible for the insurance of building structural / architecture but Lessor . We will take responsible for the insurance of the items what are being kept inside the premises by us. We understand that the landlord is not responsible for any damage caused by the tenants and which is not meaning that we have to insure the building structure. This clause is addition to the existing agreement because you have clearly mentioned in the old agreement that it was your responsibility for insure the building structure.

You may please amend the clause 12 as described above. Clause number should be chronologically because you mentioned clause 9 after 7. It should be 8.

  

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We noticed that that you haven't amended clause 12 in the contract as we discussed. We are not responsible for insuring the building structural/architecture; the lessor is. We will insure the items we are keeping inside the premises.

  • We noticed that that you haven't amended clause 12 in the contract as we discussed.
  • We are not responsible for insuring the building structural/architecture; the lessor is.
  • We will insure the items we are keeping inside the premises.
  • We understand that the landlord is not responsible for any damage caused by the tenants, which meaning we do not have to insure the building.
  • This clause is in addition to the existing agreement because you clearly mentioned in the old agreement that it was your responsibility to insure the building.
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We noticed that that you haven't amended clause 12 in the contract as we discussed. We are not responsible for insuring the building structural/architecture; the lessor is. We will insure the items we are keeping inside the premises. We understand that the landlord is not responsible for any damage caused by the tenants, which meaning we do not have to insure the building. This claus

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